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I swear,
there have been better days
to look up into the sky at the stars
from six feet underwater,

But I couldn't help myself this time

And I found myself
desperately reaching my hands up
to clear this vision
of the moon covered in
soot and dust and tears
as I kept
drowning

Because I never turn off the lights.

Because I never close my eyes.

NaPoWriMo - Day 11

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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student General Artist
This is really beautiful.
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WindFragments Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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Inevitably-dead Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. Seems to have more than one meaning.
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WindFragments Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! The meaning is whatever the reader believes it to be :)
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Houseof1000secrets Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Professional Writer
Powerful!
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WindFragments Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :love:
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Houseof1000secrets Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Professional Writer
^_^ Very welcome
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